A Fine Hunk of PorkI'm turning out Eight Legg pages better than I ever have before. I'm going to re-start up the kinktastic adventures of Donnie and Dox, and I even have a new brain baby for less serious novelette.
But dammit, there's just something lacking in this stuff I keep turning out. Most noticeable in Eight Legg, since I've been working exclusively on that for a few months now.
I read other stuff up here, and the good stories have something mine lacks. When I read through my uploaded passages, there's no ZEST.
It's a faggy thing, but something I've noticed. The good shit up here, it has some spice, that personality crap! It's like an invisible something-extra that boosts up the quality, gives the story a little life and keep out the blandness. Like a spark or something I haven't managed to put down yet.
It's like a fine hunk of pork in the crock pot- mine's edible, if a little dry, and what I'm aiming for is this fat-enriched piece of pigs ass spiced with tangy pesto and rosemary.
Amazed
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I like manga Mukuro, not anime Mukuro... :/
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Enthusiastic Hiei cosplayer.
Proud Kuwabara fan. <3
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Quality commissions for cheap! See my journal for details!
I ONLY FOLLOWED IT, FRIENDLY-LIKE!
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"Take a flying fuck at a rolling doughnut. Take a flying fuck at the moon."
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::Black wings, with a black heart of gold::
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"Take a flying fuck at a rolling doughnut. Take a flying fuck at the moon."
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__She's figured out, all her doubts were someone else's point of view_________
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look closer....[link]
POTATO.
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I like manga Mukuro, not anime Mukuro... :/
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Enthusiastic Hiei cosplayer.
Proud Kuwabara fan. <3
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Quality commissions for cheap! See my journal for details!
EGGPLANT
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"Take a flying fuck at a rolling doughnut. Take a flying fuck at the moon."
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look closer....[link]
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